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| joannie |
 Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 2:00 am |
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Location: Ohio USA
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Story title: Tonight you're Mine Completely
Summary: First 2 chapters are written and I have the story roughly outlined. The story covers school years 5 through 7, and following graduation.
It begins with an interaction between Hermione and Severus of which neither is aware. It continues through the ultimate battle. My Hermione first forms a relationship with Ron then Viktor before she realizes what she wanted all along and hopes she is not too late.
Severus, who recalls memories of what might have been, silently contemplates Hermione during those three years. After the battle Severus leaves Hogwarts to do private potion research, still lamenting the lack of a soul mate that shares his passion for potions.
I started it before HBP, and it most likely will be AU.
Rating: Chapters 1 & 2 S, middle and last chapter ratings are W.
Category/Genres: Angst, Romance, Humor, Drama, and Friendship
Ship: Hermione/Severus
Warnings: none in chapter 1 and 2
I am looking for a beta reader for grammar checking. If you feel it needs something more, I welcome critique of the plot as well. I'm not fast. I have a tendency to pick over what I have written until I am satisfied with it. I plan to cover the story in several chapters. This is my first story. I haven't formulatd a plan for the battle scene yet. The story just developed in my mind while reading the HP books.
Lois aka joannie
alternate e-mail: LoisGoldberg@ameritech.net |
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| joannie |
| Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:47 am |
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Thank you, Jackie for volunteering to beta my story.
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| joannie |
| Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:47 am |
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Thank you, Jackie for volunteering to beta my story.
Lois |
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